2010年9月23日 星期四

BBQ~ oh ya~*

thanks!!! Because you join us BBQ,we can finish this time.
Athough the place in my home was very bad.= ="
But we still finish it,It is very happy in this time!
I love BBQ with my friends that is a good meeting for us.
I love evrebody~~~~~~~ya~~~~~~~~~~~
張貼者： 於

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  1. Michael Wu2010年9月23日 晚上11:21

    Hi, Joe:
    It seems that you had a good time during the Moon Festival. However, I don't quite understand what the key point that you want to express in this blog entry. For example, you didn't mention a name first; then, you suddenly used 'you'. How do your readers know who 'you' is? In addition, the last sentence -- 'I love everybody' is overgeneralized. I hope that you can write a blog with more specific key points.

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  2. DG2010年9月24日 晚上10:13

    yes sir!

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